Job Skills for a UN Application
Please write a very short highly professional statement for a UN Proposal for a postion of Inventory Control and Distribution Supervisor for Albert Davis who holds a Master of Civil Engineer from Columbia University that includes extensive experience and qualfications related to hands-on and supervisor inventory control , packing, engineer civil engineer Columbia, stocking, inventory control, deliveries working for Air Express International based in Port-au-Prince for the past 7 years. Also include Mr. Davis entensive experience working in the banking and financial services sector on Wall Street.
Albert Davis, a Master of Civil Engineer from Columbia University, with extensive experience in hands-on and supervisory inventory control, packing, stocking, and deliveries, is highly qualified for the position of Inventory Control and Distribution Supervisor. He has been working with Air Express International in Port-au-Prince for the past seven years and has proven expertise in managing inventory and distribution operations. In addition, Mr. Davis has considerable experience working in the banking and financial services sector on Wall Street, which makes him an ideal candidate for this position.
Please modify to imply that Mr. Davis currently. holds this position and will fulfill this role as part of the team to perform in the proposal if and when selected by the UN proposal reviewers.
Albert Davis, currently holding the position of Inventory Control and Distribution Supervisor with Air Express International in Port-au-Prince, is a highly qualified candidate to fulfill the same role as part of the team proposed for the UN project. His Master of Civil Engineer degree from Columbia University, combined with his extensive experience in inventory control, packing, stocking, and deliveries, make him an asset to the team. Furthermore, his experience in the banking and financial services sector on Wall Street further highlights his ability to excel in this role. If selected by the UN proposal reviewers, Mr. Davis will play an essential role in the team's success.
Please reduce the amount of words by a third
Albert Davis, currently the Inventory Control and Distribution Supervisor at Air Express International in Port-au-Prince, holds a Master of Civil Engineer from Columbia University and has extensive experience in inventory control, packing, stocking, and deliveries. With his background in the banking and financial services sector on Wall Street, Mr. Davis is a highly qualified candidate to fulfill the same role as part of the proposed UN project team. If selected, he will be an asset to the team's success.
We can remove some of the "fluff" to make it shorter in length. They are mostly interested in the skills, experience and education credentials. Also please find a better way to stay "stocking"
Albert Davis, an Inventory Control and Distribution Supervisor at Air Express International in Port-au-Prince, holds a Master's degree in Civil Engineering from Columbia University. He has extensive experience in inventory control, packing, and deliveries, and has worked in the banking and financial services sector on Wall Street. Mr. Davis is a highly qualified candidate for the proposed UN project team with his expertise in inventory control and distribution operations.
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